“It’s a thin line between
heaven and here.”
-Bubbles, The Wire
It may be because I took a class with Susan Straight, or maybe
she writes differently than I typically read, but I expected more out of this
book. She is the second professor I’ve had a class with that I actually read the
book for. One professor required it, and that was okay because his book was
gorgeous and I cried reading it. Though I think the man is cocky for making his
classes read it. But Susan, I expected more out of you.
I believe my main source of complaint comes from there being
too many characters. I couldn’t keep track of who was who, and who was related
to who, and who saw what and when. This made all the point of view shifts
difficult for me, and I generally love changes in narration. Almost all of my
writing has at least two narrators.
My main source of awe was the words. Straight is a hilarious
woman, gifted in the craft of fiction (that was the title of the course!).
There were moments that were clear and beautiful. I enjoyed the read. But would
I recommend? Not to most people.
I love characters and plot. This book had both, but I wasn’t
connected to any of it. The plot mattered but I felt that we, the readers, knew
more than we should too soon.
The best part of the book, and the time that I felt most
connected with the plot and characters was the last two sections/chapters. They
were what I expected when she mentioned the book in her class. A boy who finds
out his druggy mother is dead before his last chance to take the SATs; his last
chance to get out of his shitty life and the shitty town. The opening and the
middle weren’t about this, but some were, of course. But the book was mostly
about a town and how this woman’s death shows the connection between all the
people. Which sounds great, right?
But then my stupid ass brain couldn’t remember character
names and even if some characters were a male or female. And in a book that has
prostitutes, rape, and family, the genders matter a little.
I plan to read other reviews of the book. The “about”
section of the book states that some of the sections/chapters were originally short
stories. Honestly, I’m sure they were better stand alone. 2 out of 5.
If you read this Professor Straight, don’t hate me! I loved
your class!
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